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Monday, May 29, 2017

Should all children walk to school?

Should all children walk to school?

At Halsey Drive school  students come to school in a car or bus  and other children walk to school.  There is a common opinion all children should walk to school. I strongly believe  that children should not walk to school  And here are two reasons why.


A news report tells us children should not walk to school before 10 years old and over because they could get hurt or meet dangerous people. So if children don't walk to school they would be much more safer. Many articles have been written to support the claim that all children can not walk to school.


Perth Now Sunday Times says kids can easily get distracted and cross the road when a car's coming and some children have been severely injured or even killed crossing the road without parental supervision. Therefore for this very reason children should not walk to school.

We can now be very very sure that children should not  walk to school children  can easily get distracted and cross the road. Children under ten should not cross the road. You can  
now be completely sure that children should not walk to school.


This week we  have been writing arguments with evidence. 



1 comment:

  1. Ka pai Dillon, you are beginning to used evidence to back up your reasons. Great work. - Mrs T

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